A.Introduction :Introduction to Argumentative Writing – Censorship in modern music
thesis statement: although some people think that censorship in music is needed, although i believ that censorship in music is not needed if it's still in context
B.Body :
Opposing argument :
Opposing argument saying that all censorshop ismus be neede whatever the context is whic means that all political, religous, and moral that contradicts mus be censored.
Rebuttal Argument :
but some people dent that clarification, most of the moderns music has alot of bad word in it if it;s still in the context
Opposing argument
The opposing argument said it wiill hurt someone feeling if it was in or out of context no matter what the situatation is
Rebuttal argument
also the anti-censorship people said if you listen music just to enjoy it and don't take thing seriously if any of the words somehow offends you, just don't listen to it
Own point of view
-although i believe that censorship in music is not needed if it's still in the context
-but i think censorship is needed if the music had some racial, and out of context religous hate on them
C.Conclusions
As the conclusion i think music has some postive and negative values, music is one of many reasons as we humans to enjoy arts.
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