Outline #1 censorship in music

A.Introduction :Introduction to Argumentative Writing – Censorship in modern music
thesis statement: although some people think that censorship in music is needed, although i believ that censorship in music is not needed if it's still in context

B.Body :
Opposing argument :
Opposing argument saying that all censorshop ismus be neede whatever the context is whic means that all political, religous, and moral that contradicts mus be censored.

Rebuttal Argument :

but some people dent that clarification, most of the moderns music has alot of bad word in it if it;s still in the context

Opposing argument

 The opposing argument said it wiill hurt someone feeling if it was in or out of context no matter what the situatation is

Rebuttal argument

also the anti-censorship people said if you listen music just to enjoy it and don't take thing seriously if any of the words somehow offends you, just don't listen to it

Own point of view

-although i believe that censorship in music is not needed if it's still in the context

-but i think censorship is needed if the music had some racial, and out of context religous hate on them

C.Conclusions

 As the conclusion i think music has some postive and negative values, music is one of many reasons as we humans to enjoy arts.

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Argumentative essay #1 Censorship in music

   Censorship in music   

     Censorship of music refers to practice of editing of musical work for reasons, stemming from a wide variety of motivation including moral, political, or religious reasons, censorship can range from the complete government enforced legal prohibition of a musical work, t private voulantary removal of context when a musical works appears in a certain context, although i believe that censorship in music is not needed if it's still in the context

      Opposing argument saying that all censorshop ismus be neede whatever the context is whic means that all political, religous, and moral that contradicts mus be censored. but some people dent that clarification, most of the moderns music has alot of bad word in it if it;s still in the context people says it does not need to be censored because it won't hurt anyone

     The opposing argument said it wiill hurt someone feeling if it was in or out of context no matter what the situatation is, explained by them, also the anti-censorship people said if you listen music just to enjoy it and don't take thing seriously if any of the words somehow offends you, just don't listen to it explained by them.

     Generally censorship in music sometimes is very overexagarrated which someone will find it offensive no matter what is it, music are listen whe we have a hard day or stressful day  so we can calm ourselves but i think censorship is needed if the music had some racial, and religous hate on them

     As the conclusion i think music has some postive and negative values, music is one of many reasons as we humans to enjoy arts.

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Argumentative writing worksheet

WORKSHEET OF ARGUMENTATIVE WRITING

WORKSHEET

WELCOME

Welcome: Introduction to Argumentative Writing – Censorship in modern music

Description: An argumentative writing or essay is a genre of writing that requires the student to investigate a topic, collect, generate, and evaluate evidence, to develop points or an argument concerning the issues about music censorship

Keywords : Argumentative essay, argumentative writing, music, censorhsip, pros, and cons
Author : M.Faisal aripin

INTRODUCTION

As a writer, you need to know how to write a good argumentative essay. You may collect the datas from various sources to support your essay. You are taking the journey to explore the basic structure, techniques and steps to write a good argumentative essay and how you can persuade and present well-reasoned arguments on a debatable issue-Censorship in music

Before you start your writing process, let’s watch the video related to censorship in music:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jqA9lam0td0

TASK

To be a good writer you need to imagine that you are a researcher and your task is to investigate, gather and develop ideas or information on either one of these below:

1.        the structure of an argumentative essay

2.        the steps in writing a good argumentative essay and

3.        the techniques or approaches in writing a good argumentative essay

Present your report in 10-15 minutes!

Your next journey is to do research on the issue of Censorship in music Develop and write at least 3 argumentative points and 3 counter-points on this issue ! Remember, you have to take a firm stance on this issue. Be daring to tell or relate to others how things should be! Provide reasons to support all your claims and refute the opposing side of each argument points. Don't forget to cite experts who agree with you!

Resources

1. Steps in writing Argumentative Essay

    essaywriter.pro/2015/10/15/guide-writing-argumentative-essay/

2. Argumentative Writing format

    https://apessay.com/order/?rid=ea55690ca8f7b080

3. The power of Argumentative Writing

    https://www.kibin.com/essay-writing-blog/argumentative-essay/

4. Developing an argument

https://proofreadmydocument.com.au/writing-tips/7-ways-to-develop-an-argument/

5.    Video 2 (How to Write a Good Argumentative Essay: Logical Structure

    https://youtu.be/tAmgEa1B1v1

6. Video 3  (Structure of an argumentative essay) https://youtu.be/VSgj9TqxaHg

PROCESS

1.    Work individually. Remember, before you embark in the quest to write an argumentative essay, make sure you have read all the articles and watch videos on the steps, format, structure, developing arguments, writing the introduction, writing the first argument and conclusion of an argumentative essay. 

2.    You take the role as a researcher to explore, investigate and write a report on each topic: the structure of an argumentative essay, the steps in writing a good argumentative essay and the technique or approach to write a good argumentative essay. Then, combine your work on these topics and present your findings to the class. Use large charts or posters to present! 

3.    Next, read the articles given and watch the videos on the issue of video games and why should it be banned for the minors.

4.    List down all the pros and cons using the T-chart organizer. Then, decide what stance to take, whether playing video games is bad or the opposite and why violent video games should be banned for the minors or vice-versa.   

5.    Write your argumentative essay in 350 words using a good thesis statement and the minimal five-part structure you have already learnt.

6.    Post and share your work in the classroom blog created by your teacher for assessment and comments.  

Resource

Website:

http://cornellsun.com/2011/04/10/censorship-the-good-the-bad-and-the-ugly/

http://www.debate.org/opinions/should-censorship-in-music-exist

http://www.newsactivist.com/en/articles/champlain-ethics-1282-nicole-fournier-sylvester/music-censorship-good-thing

Video :

 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jqA9lam0td0 (Music Censorship: RELEVANT OR RIDICULOUS?)

Congratulations and Well Done!

You have accomplished your tasks!

In your journey of exploration, you have learnt the important skills to write a good argumentative essay! As a researcher, you have gathered some information on the structure, steps and techniques to write a good argumentative essay. Are there any other important tips on how to write a good argumentative essay? What are some of the tips or guidance given by experts or tutors?   

You have also taken the challenge to work collaboratively and prepare charts or posters to present your group report!  You have also successfully accomplished the task in writing the argumentative essay on the issue of the impact of the internet on Censorship in music

RESOURCES

  essaywriter.pro/2015/10/15/guide-writing-argumentative-essay/

  https://apessay.com/order/?rid=ea55690ca8f7b080

  https://www.kibin.com/essay-writing-blog/argumentative-essay/

 https://proofreadmydocument.com.au/writing-tips/7-ways-to-develop-an-argument/

  https://youtu.be/tAmgEa1B1v1

 https://youtu.be/VSgj9TqxaHg

http://cornellsun.com/2011/04/10/censorship-the-good-the-bad-and-the-ugly/

http://www.debate.org/opinions/should-censorship-in-music-exist

http://www.newsactivist.com/en/articles/champlain-ethics-1282-nicole-fournier-sylvester/music-censorship-good-thing

 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jqA9lam0td0

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Outline#2 Video games good or bad

Outline

Playing video games good or bad?

Introduction : are video games good or bad?

Thesis: Video games can sometime be good and sometimes it can also be bad, and there is also a benefit of playing video games.

Body: 

Opposing argument

-most people think that video games is bad because it has violence in it and it teaches kid to become violent to the society

Rebuttal argument

- meanwhile if the kid plays like a good video games it can actually help the kid become smarter and creative.

Opposing argument

- Video games also have ratings on them, video games have these ratings to restrict and underage children to play them

Rebuttal argument

-sometime these ratings are ignored by the parents because they think is not important

Opposing argument

-people think that game make you an antisocial and aactually make you depressed.

Rebuttal argument

- video games itself that video games help you relax and make you happy and also you will learn some english at the game that you are playing.

Conclusion

So the video games can be good and or bad.

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Video Games Good Or Bad #Essay 2

Playing video games

Good Or bad?

      Are video Games good or bad for you? it can be both. video games are frowned upon by parents as time wasters, some education experts think that these games corrupt the brain playing video games with violent common are easily blamed by the media aand experts as the reason why some young people become violent, but many scientist and psychologist find that video games can actually have some benefits, the main one is make kids smarts video games may actually teach kid high level of thinking and creativity.

      Video games good or bad is depends what is the game the kid are playing, most people think that video games is bad because it has violence in it and it teaches kid to become violent to the society, meanwhile if the kid plays like a good video games it can actually help the kid become smarter and creative.

      Video games also have ratings on them, video games have these ratings to restrict and underage children to play them, sometime these ratings are ignored by the parents because they think is not important, these ratins are very useful to know that what age of the children to be allowed to play this game.

     My view on video games itself that video games help you relax and make you happy and also you will learn some english at the game that you are plying. some people think that game make you an antisocial and aactually make you depressed, but i have to disagree at that state ment as a person that have ever to play video games i think it make me relax and forget bad things that happened

    So the conclusion is video games can be both be good or bad it depends on your prespecticve if you think that video games make you an antisocial then it's bad but if you think that video games can help you relax then it's a good benefit that video games has.

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